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I'm afraid this chapter won't give you any of the answers you seek. I do hope you 'enjoy' reading it. Thank you for the great comments and for following this tale. Mary K Did they bury him Jarrod...

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Oh Dear!I hope you hurry back!I could feel the emotion, the sorrow!And I loved this line:Jarrod gasped surprised at the venom in her voice. I could kill her Jarrod, right now I could kill the little...

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WOW! That was powerful writing!!!! I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes that I'll have to explain to my daughter. This is a fantastic story & I'm always looking forward to more!!!!!Lisa

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Vic's grief was so real! She is reacting truly like a mother who has just lost her beloved child. And that little angry outburst at Hester really hits the spot. Haven't we all felt like that at one...

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So Victoria reels in shock when the casket is opened- could it be from relief that the body they see is NOT Heath's???? Better be, MaryK, or us Heathens are coming to get ya!!!!!!!

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Please say this isn't Heath Please hurry back soon.....

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Aaaahhh!! Another cliffhanger!!I'm still convinced that it is not Heath in that coffin. Come back soon and prove me right!Barbara

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I haven't been posting much lately but I had to give you a compliment on this chapter... very tight and grief is so hard to do without melodrama. That being said, I got a sudden flash there towards...

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Wonderful chapter in a wonderful story! The descriptions of the family's reaction to Heath's "death" were well written. Now, please so we can find out just what Jarrod and Victoria see in the casket.

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So Wonderful -- Can't wait until we find out if the body is Heath or not -- (I'm hoping NOT)This is a great story, told so well with wonderful characterization and true to life dialog -- Can't wait...

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I've spent so much time on this cliff you keep stranding me on that I'm thinking about living here. It'll look real nice with a couch and a table with a potted plant.Wonderful chapter MaryK. As...

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Did you hear my screech of frustration when I came to the end of this chapter? It was loud enough that I'm sure you could hear in all the way in the UK. I thought this was a great chapter...it just...

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The grief he saw in her grey eyes ate at his heart. But I should have been. I should have been able to convince Nick. She stood for a long time staring out of the window, saying nothing. Finally she...

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Excellent writing and I'm hoping it is not Heath in that casket!

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argh! We must wait !!! But it is a good wait! cried again! LOL Truly a wonderful story!Deb

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Is it or isn't it? with some answers. Heartbreaking chapter.

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Such a powerful and poignanat chapter, the whole family's grief came across so clearly, but none more so than Victoria's...and then her anger at Hester and at herself for failing to resolve the...

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Wonderful read, Gene's uncertainty not having known Heath well enough, Jarrod's and Audra's grief and Victoria's anger and turmoil. Now for the moment of truth!

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I'm away from the board awhile and come back to cliffhangers. No answers indeed. Do hurry back with more please before I have heart attacks. Ya wouldn't want ta do that ta me when I'm already poorly?...

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Wow ... Victoria's outburst ... I could kill her Jarrod, right now I could kill the little bitch ... words spoken by a grief-stricken mother, not a woman concerned with proper decorum. And now, the...

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